Comments on: For all teenagers. What do you think of my writing? http://www.theshoes-blog.com/red-tape-shoes/for-all-teenagers-what-do-you-think-of-my-writing The Shoes Blog is where I write all about shoes Wed, 30 Dec 2009 16:16:59 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Dinulchik http://www.theshoes-blog.com/red-tape-shoes/for-all-teenagers-what-do-you-think-of-my-writing/comment-page-1#comment-3467 Dinulchik Fri, 23 Oct 2009 04:23:59 +0000 http://www.theshoes-blog.com/red-tape-shoes/for-all-teenagers-what-do-you-think-of-my-writing#comment-3467 IT IS WONDERFUL I HAVE NOTHING TO TELL YOU DID YOU ALREADY PUBLISH YOUR BOOK BECAUSE IF YOU DO IT WILL BE GREAT. WELL THERE ARE SOME STUFF TO CORRECT BUT IT WAS VERY GOOD IT FEEL LIKE YOU WHERE A AUTHOR FOR YOUR HALL LIFE.DON'T FORGET TO CORRECT YOUR SPELLINGS AND GRAMMAR NEXT TIME.GOOD LUKE<br><b>References : </b><br>GOOD JOB AND GOOD LUCK IF PUBLISH YOUR BOOK. IT IS WONDERFUL I HAVE NOTHING TO TELL YOU DID YOU ALREADY PUBLISH YOUR BOOK BECAUSE IF YOU DO IT WILL BE GREAT. WELL THERE ARE SOME STUFF TO CORRECT BUT IT WAS VERY GOOD IT FEEL LIKE YOU WHERE A AUTHOR FOR YOUR HALL LIFE.DON’T FORGET TO CORRECT YOUR SPELLINGS AND GRAMMAR NEXT TIME.GOOD LUKE
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GOOD JOB AND GOOD LUCK IF PUBLISH YOUR BOOK.

]]> By: ? http://www.theshoes-blog.com/red-tape-shoes/for-all-teenagers-what-do-you-think-of-my-writing/comment-page-1#comment-3466 ? Fri, 23 Oct 2009 04:15:59 +0000 http://www.theshoes-blog.com/red-tape-shoes/for-all-teenagers-what-do-you-think-of-my-writing#comment-3466 Your grammar is appalling. It's "I" not "i", "I've" not "i've" etc... When saying "I" as yourself it's always a capital letter. Never small letter. Also. When starting a " <-- It's a capital too. Spelling was awful. I suggest a spell checker next time. Sorry but I am being HONEST here. I do like the amount of content. That's really good. Nice long story line not a simple "Hi. I'm Jake. The END!"<br><b>References : </b><br> Your grammar is appalling. It’s "I" not "i", "I’ve" not "i’ve" etc… When saying "I" as yourself it’s always a capital letter. Never small letter. Also. When starting a " <– It’s a capital too.

Spelling was awful. I suggest a spell checker next time.

Sorry but I am being HONEST here.

I do like the amount of content. That’s really good. Nice long story line not a simple "Hi. I’m Jake. The END!"
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]]> By: ~*~Ashlyn~*~ http://www.theshoes-blog.com/red-tape-shoes/for-all-teenagers-what-do-you-think-of-my-writing/comment-page-1#comment-3465 ~*~Ashlyn~*~ Fri, 23 Oct 2009 03:51:59 +0000 http://www.theshoes-blog.com/red-tape-shoes/for-all-teenagers-what-do-you-think-of-my-writing#comment-3465 I Thant it needs a lot of work. It's not bad, though. Your sentences are very choppy , which makes it hard to read.<br><b>References : </b><br> I Thant it needs a lot of work. It’s not bad, though. Your sentences are very choppy , which makes it hard to read.
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