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Comment on creative story writing…..? by bodicea77

bodicea77 — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 16:16:59 +0000

If this is coursework, please revise it. Heavily. I’ll try to be constructive. Use fewer adverbs. (-ly words) Try stronger verbs, rather than modifying the ones you use so much. Check capitalisation. Check the use of semi-colons. Yours aren’t properly used. Also, your sentences are too long for the most part. Where you use a comma, you can almost always end the sentence, They have more punch if they are shorter. There are great thoughts here, but in your present form, not many people will bother to read them. Learn to write properly, then try for avant garde. Good luck. If you want any help with revision, I’ll be glad to help.
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Comment on creative story writing…..? by The Stig

The Stig — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 15:44:59 +0000

There are some serious errors here I would suggest you look at your language skills a little. The piece does have plenty of drama and I like it for that. Not a bad effort at all.
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Comment on what are some good outdoor nike basketball shoes? by THE BEAST

THE BEAST — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 13:05:59 +0000

Nike zoom Sharkley
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Comment on what are some good outdoor nike basketball shoes? by Herbert C

Herbert C — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 12:35:59 +0000

I say you should go to a local store, finishline, footlocker, whatever. just tell the sales person you are looking for basketball shoes, but not sure what to get. (no, you are not trying to ask opinions from the sales person, you are trying to tell him that , you might try few more pairs before you decide which one to get ) ..

choose the ones you think look the best. then try them on, pick the most comfortable pair (if necessary, take price into consideration too).. our feet are all different. there are no correct answers or recommendations on what shoes are good. after all , i think the outlook is very important.

AND 1 Compare to Nike? you will get different answers, so why bother? just go try them on! good luck and have fun!
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Comment on what are some good outdoor nike basketball shoes? by wizards187-- agent 0 come back !

wizards187-- agent 0 come back ! — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 11:53:59 +0000

Hell no.. not zoom for outdoors.
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Comment on what are some good outdoor nike basketball shoes? by Nicole A

Nicole A — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 11:37:59 +0000

zooms arent that good you should get nike air raid they're perfect for outdoors
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Comment on Will Knee support/braces and basketball high top shoes than 3/4 ones help reduce pain when playing basketball? by handbags

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Comment on Would you like to take my test? by SAWGIRL

SAWGIRL — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 18:28:59 +0000

Fun test, scored around 140, never been in the hood but does trailer trash count?? Funniest questions #45, 47, 48!!
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Comment on Will Knee support/braces and basketball high top shoes than 3/4 ones help reduce pain when playing basketball? by Amanuel

Amanuel — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 18:25:59 +0000

im not sure if it will reduce the pain. I know it hurts because i recently had knee pains. Wearing the knee support will help a little bit but im not sure if it will remarkably heal the pain. The same with braces. check the shoes your wearing though. Shoes with bad arch support mess with some tendons in the back of your foot which are directly connected to your knees so check out your shoes
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Comment on Which basketball shoes should I get out of these two? by cavs fan 23

cavs fan 23 — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 04:50:59 +0000

Hyperize. It's light and it has a zoom air bag
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